Islam Against The World (Created By Me) Let me know what you think made couple of years ago =)

mush91 —

What has this world come to?
UK residents a national breakthrough,
But its still a messed up society where its Islam against da world,
little boys getting killed and dey rape da girls.
We dont understand what its like to be muslim,
by not following our religion we're attacking da islamic system.
and how can we call ourselves muslim when we do da same as all da uvers?
we drink blaze mix and we still call ourselves brothers.
Well close your eyes and picture judgement day
well what do you think your mind body and soul would say?
and im not saying dat im so perfect but everyone knows dat keeping knowledge is all worth it.
and at da end we aint all perfect people,
but move a step forward by treating people equal,
and treat islam for what it is and not just a word
and help brothers and sisters dying in Gaza and around da world.
Pray five times a day and dont do haram things
spend a little on donations and not just on bling.
You see islam is already under attack by da Kafirs outside
and we say we're muslims and we attack it from da inside.
This is out to everyone, all the boys and girls,
just think about what you do because its islam against da world.!...

...And now we say we're different but we still role like dem.
you might stop to listen but i guarantee you start again.
and this aint suppose to be dose normal tracks,
because this is a track with meaning, this is a track with facts.
They attack us in many ways after they call us terrorists,
but when the strongest fight back we're classed as racist.
so now they can call us terrorist and charge without evidence,
not coz you got a gun, a bomb, but because your an islamic resident.
You then see the media is also against islam,
they step on our religion when they promote shaytan.
and all of this happens and its infront of us,
and we carry on our lives as if its them we trust.
and islam is about peace and unity but we care only for ourselves,
we care about our power, we care about our wealth.
we care about who does what and who knows who,
but no one seems to care bout what islam requires us to do.
Now think about what i said all you boys and girls,
Its us against Shaytan and its Islam against da world

Truth's_Razors — Tue, 23 Nov 2010 - 22:13

[quote=mush91]

and at da end we aint all perfect people,
but move a step forward by treating people equal,
and treat islam for what it is and not just a word
and help brothers and sisters dying in Gaza and around da world.
Pray five times a day and dont do haram things
spend a little on donations and not just on bling.
You see islam is already under attack by da Kafirs outside
and we say we're muslims and we attack it from da inside.
This is out to everyone, all the boys and girls,
just think about what you do because its islam against da world.!...[/quote]

I like this part the best

[quote=mush91]
Its us against Shaytan and its Islam against da world[/quote]

Oh and this line too - nicely rounded off.

I'll give you a little constructive criticism (which may seem pointless but just to give you proper feedback)

Firstly i like the whole thing - it has good build up, tells a story (basically it moves forward as you read) and gives an ending too. However it was difficult (not impossible) to read with the 'dat and dis' thing going esp since the title was 'Islam against the world' not '..da world' - maybe i'm just being picky.

Secondly, I like the fact that it's US in the wrong - which is what you mainly talk about throughout - but the one part about THEY (the media etc) makes it less unique - because we hear that everywhere, i pretty much liked the concept of the Muslims being in the wrong - because that's not something you would hear all the time whereas the media stuff is.

Um that's all i can think of at the moment.

*just my opinion.

Bijou — Wed, 24 Nov 2010 - 09:12

Secondly, I like the fact that it's US in the wrong - which is what you mainly talk about throughout - but the one part about THEY (the media etc) makes it less unique - because we hear that everywhere, i pretty much liked the concept of the Muslims being in the wrong - because that's not something you would hear all the time whereas the media stuff is.

I agree with this! We don't reflect on our own bad behaviour; instead we are willingly ready to blame the media and other people and sources for our own mistakes.

Truth's_Razors — Thu, 25 Nov 2010 - 19:38

[quote=mush91]yeah obviously i appreciate the comments and lol i just wrote it with the das because thats kind of how i read it my self so i changed it thinking it will be easier for other people since it is a youth thing.

i like the fact that your honest :P[/quote]

Lol totally get where you're coming from with the youth thing!

LookingToSee — Thu, 25 Nov 2010 - 20:15

[quote=Truth's_Razors][
BECAUUUSEEE

I've BEEN THERE, DONE THAT! lool[/quote]

look at the defensiveness in these words...
you forgot the "done that, forgot that" part:P

Mush = of the awesome gender?

TRuth: you know what i discovered? edgware road station is at the end of the district line! so i just have to sit on ONE train to go there!

TPOS — Fri, 26 Nov 2010 - 17:31

[quote=mush91]
who's ocean? 😛
ok your confusing me now lol[/quote]
[quote=Ocean]
eh?[/quote]
From the other topic:

[quote=Ocean][quote=Truth's_Razors]

19 - Very exact. Hmm do you know something that we don't?
[/quote]
Mush91

ie 1991

And it's a Female.

To answer your Q Mushy... but don't really listen to me.
As long as you can keep your emotions and feelings at bay... yeah go ahead make as many friends as you like but nothing there to tame them you're BOUND to fall in deep poo. Trust me it happens more often than you can imagine!

Therefore, that is why people it's advised to stay away from mingling. There are guys on my course who absolutely LOVE cartoons and they are such a laugh! but that's it. It doesn't go any further than that. If you are going to have guy mates as a girl then you have to make sure that THEY too understand what is allowed and what isn't.[/quote]

mush91 — Sat, 27 Nov 2010 - 23:23

yes yes i've written soooo many but i dont think some of them are appropriate to write on here so i think i shouldnt just yet lol
and to ocean i'd just like to say HUH!? lol
btw everyone just needs to know IM A GUY not a transgender, not a girl lol no stop picking on me people lol im going to write something in dedication to you both so let me know what youd like me to write and talk about 🙂

mush91 — Sat, 27 Nov 2010 - 23:27

actually it only happens because people allow it to....whereas me i do have mates i can see every day reh reh reh but i chose not to because i chose not to allow myself to get to close or attatched to them (bad experiences) and to be honest in a way its a good thing and at times to be honest i wish i dont...dont know whats the point of me saying this but yeah 😛

TPOS — Sat, 27 Nov 2010 - 23:36

[quote=mush91]yes yes i've written soooo many but i dont think some of them are appropriate to write on here so i think i shouldnt just yet lol
and to ocean i'd just like to say HUH!? lol
btw everyone just needs to know IM A GUY not a transgender, not a girl lol no stop picking on me people lol im going to write something in dedication to you both so let me know what youd like me to write and talk about :)[/quote]
Wow, i feel special ^_^ 😃 I'll think about it and let you know 🙂

[quote=mush91]actually it only happens because people allow it to....whereas me i do have mates i can see every day reh reh reh but i chose not to because i chose not to allow myself to get to close or attatched to them (bad experiences) and to be honest in a way its a good thing and at times to be honest i wish i dont...dont know whats the point of me saying this but yeah :P[/quote]
huh? what are you on about over here? :S lol

Truth's_Razors — Mon, 29 Nov 2010 - 15:42

[quote=Lilly][quote=Truth's_Razors][
BECAUUUSEEE

I've BEEN THERE, DONE THAT! lool[/quote]

look at the defensiveness in these words...
you forgot the "done that, forgot that" part:P

Mush = of the awesome gender?

TRuth: you know what i discovered? edgware road station is at the end of the district line! so i just have to sit on ONE train to go there![/quote]

FORGOT - neverrrrrrrr!

Onee train - yayyy! We can have our meeting (when it happens) there then! I have to get umm like two and it takes me an hour or so - not thattt bad.

[quote=mush91]aint we all 🙂 lol

guesing your older older old? lool[/quote]

LOL i've decided i'm not thattt old - just older than Lillio

TPOS — Tue, 30 Nov 2010 - 19:19

[quote=mush91]does that mean im the oldest? how old are you guys?...

and you are old dude i see the white hair lol and the hanging wings that look like parachutes 🙂

it dont take me to long since i live near mileend muhahaha lol[/quote]
If you are 19, then no you're not the oldest.

TPOS — Tue, 30 Nov 2010 - 19:31

[quote=mush91]well yes im 19 and how am i not the oldest? :O
how old are you?....dont tell me your 60 or something?
and atleast im the biggest 🙂 got something to be happy about atleast lol[/quote]
LOL no I younger than you 😃

Why would you want to be the oldest??

TPOS — Tue, 30 Nov 2010 - 19:47

[quote=mush91]you know what lol i actually dont know why i would want to be
how old are you? i feel old now :([/quote]
O dear. You don't seem like a secure child; one minute your sad because you're not the oldest and the next your sad because you're not the youngest. 😛 (I kid)