Lillyana Jones and the country of Room

She looked at the dreaded door of the room at the end of the corridor..walking towards it reluctantly, she pushed it open, waiting for the door to stick onto the door stopper and reveal the whole abomination.

Walking in, she found her closest friend, Jacket, hanged at the back of the door. And lying there, suffocated, was her second in command, SideBag, he has succumbed to the quickclothes.

Justice needed to be established!! Lillyana pulled herself together and told herself that this was to be done, taking other victims, she hanged them alongside her comrade. Some of the lesser culprits ended in the Dark Dark wardrobe... and others still, the worst of them all, the chiefs of desolation, the leaders of this revolution, they ended in the Laundry Bag, awaiting judgment. 30 or 40 degrees? Quick wash or the Long non-colorfast wash?

Then came “the pile of GCSE stuff” towering over the whole room, it was a well balanced ecosystem, that the slightest touch could topple over and create chaos throughout the Room. Lillyana was already tired and has being struck emotionally by the loss of Jacket and Sidebag. Could she do it? Invocating Allah the All Mighty she plunged in head first...

Piles needed to be build, from the constructive and well enjoyed subjects, they would get the chance to be carried forward to the next year, for their hard work truly deserved respect and a place on The Shelf.

Then there was the dreaded orange bag! All papers knew what this meant! The loft! This place meant abandonment for AT LEAST a couple of year! But Lillyana was fair and only the papers who she showed recognition to went in this bag. She wished deeply to keep them by her side but space would not allow it and space was such a stingy ruler... But Lillyana had to admit, the paper from the village of Resistant Materials were gotten rid off a bit too quickly and put that bit too fast at the bottom of the orange bag...She reassured them, a string of explorers would come after her and would need their service more than once.

Then came the traveler papers, the ones who didn’t belong anywhere and did not hold any useful information. For them, not having used their life wisely, was the worst of punishment. Yet, Lillyana has still some mercy left in her, she send them to Recycle Bin, who would allow them another go at life and maybe even a new career path.

Lillyana stared around her, she could not believe it, But Room had being tamed and changed into something livable and...dare she say it? Enjoyable!

Soon a new wave of foreign papers would join them. She and the rest of the people of Room would welcome them with open arms. After all, this; the losses, the sacrifices, the resettlement, all had being done for their arrival.

Comments

Damn, you made it out alive!
Blum 3

"How many people find fault in what they're reading and the fault is in their own understanding" Al Mutanabbi

I DID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so no revival/fb/hotmail account for you.

I MADE IT TO THE OTHER SIDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe

Is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary?

ah well, having 2 accounts would be too much to keep up with, i suppose
Btw im jealous of your creativity and imagination; you turned something simple (and boring?) into something entertaining and funny!
Urgh Sad Blum 3
(i thought you'd like to know, you have some spelling mistakes :-P)

"How many people find fault in what they're reading and the fault is in their own understanding" Al Mutanabbi

Why, thank you, and as my new post in "did you know" when im being complimented im suppose to say
Allaahumma laa tu'aakhithnee bimaa yaqooloona, waghfir lee maa laa ya'lamoona [waj'alnee khayram-mimmaa yadhunnoon].

I'll proofread and change and if there is still spelling mistakes (i bet its S's and silly ones like that) then you'll have to TELL ME o.o

btw: just used the spellchecker.. Blum 3

Is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary?

That was utterly BRILLIANT - I can't do adventure stories at all - well i assume i can't anyway!

Loved the washing machine bit - was veryyy amusing! Good Work Lillyana!

Jihad of the Nafs (The Struggle of the Soul)

:O thanks!!

coming from you, its a great compliment! Jazakallah!

well...tidying my room is BORING so i sit there and start imagining, then i try to write it in Word and if its any good then REvival! Biggrin

Power of Silence: did you do a creative writing based on OMAM for Coursework?

Is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary?

no. what on earth is OMAM?

"How many people find fault in what they're reading and the fault is in their own understanding" Al Mutanabbi

i think lilly and truth should do a comic strip on TheRevival together instead of the usual

 

OF MICE AND MEN!
how did you study OMAM without ever using OMAM!

a comic strip? Me? haha! i have those brainstorm and stuff like what i wrote here comes out, most of the time, i fail, quite dramatically...

you're gonna draw?

Is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary?

Lilly wrote:
OF MICE AND MEN!

oh! :oops:

"How many people find fault in what they're reading and the fault is in their own understanding" Al Mutanabbi

Lilly wrote:

a comic strip? Me? haha! i have those brainstorm and stuff like what i wrote here comes out, most of the time, i fail, quite dramatically...

you're gonna draw?

Don't get me involved. This is between you and Truth. get ideas and start making them happen now.

 

:O

Truth hasnt said anything yet...

Is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary?

A comic strip, really? me? Lilly maybe, i don't really think i'm all that funny!

Nice thought though Smile

Jihad of the Nafs (The Struggle of the Soul)

Truth's_Razors wrote:
A comic strip, really? me? Lilly maybe, i don't really think i'm all that funny!

Nice thought though Smile

i think COMIC strip is misleading...

Is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary?

I don't know. Something that involves both of you.