My version of 50 Cents In da Klub

Published by Showkat on 5 January, 2007 - 14:36

Salaams All

This is my latest poem

In da club
The hub
Of my interaction
With the hunies and babes

Like a film star
I get ready
Shower and shave
Face cream and after shave
Gel and latest hairstyle

Matching shoes, trousers and shirt
Have to look good
Enough to eat
And be eaten

In da club
Ready to pull
Notch up another scalp
To add to my tally
100 nearly

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Submitted by mmm on 5 January, 2007 - 17:41

TBH what is the point of this one?

(Not even reading the rest)

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He who sacrifices his conscience to ambition, burns a picture to obtain the ashes!

Submitted by Showkat on 5 January, 2007 - 18:37

I think its best to reserve judgement until u read the whole thing, which would expalin the point inshAllah.

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[url], the place to be

Submitted by Seraphim on 5 January, 2007 - 20:56

"Showkat" wrote:
I think its best to reserve judgement until u read the whole thing, which would expalin the point inshAllah.

Then mayb it would have been a good idea to post the whole thing.

I read the whole thing... it neither told me something i didnt already know nor did it do me any good. Other than that... it was alright

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Back in BLACK

Submitted by Exquisite on 7 January, 2007 - 12:51

[color=magenta]Assalamu alaykum

I really enjoyed reading this poem, although many of us are aware of these things going on in the Muslim community i think the poem was very well written and puts things into perspective.

I think what the brother was trying to do was use his talents at poetry writing and expressin his views through that.

MashAllah brother u got talent i enjoy reading ur poems, keep up! [/color]

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[b][color=DeepPink]O you who believe, If you help (in the cause of) Allah, He will help you, and make your foothold firm[/color][color=DeepSkyBlue] {Surah Muhammad7}[/color][/b]

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