My version of 50 Cents In da Klub | The Revival

Salaams All

This is my latest poem

http://www.7cgen.com/index.php?showtopic=6790

In da club
The hub
Of my interaction
With the hunies and babes

Like a film star
I get ready
Shower and shave
Face cream and after shave
Gel and latest hairstyle

Matching shoes, trousers and shirt
Have to look good
Enough to eat
And be eaten

In da club
Ready to pull
Notch up another scalp
To add to my tally
100 nearly

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My version of 50 Cents In da Klub

mmm — Fri, 5 Jan 2007 - 17:41

TBH what is the point of this one?

(Not even reading the rest)

My version of 50 Cents In da Klub

Showkat — Fri, 5 Jan 2007 - 18:37

I think its best to reserve judgement until u read the whole thing, which would expalin the point inshAllah.

My version of 50 Cents In da Klub

Seraphim — Fri, 5 Jan 2007 - 20:56

[quote="Showkat"]I think its best to reserve judgement until u read the whole thing, which would expalin the point inshAllah.[/quote]

Then mayb it would have been a good idea to post the whole thing.

I read the whole thing... it neither told me something i didnt already know nor did it do me any good. Other than that... it was alright

My version of 50 Cents In da Klub

Exquisite — Sun, 7 Jan 2007 - 12:51

[color=magenta]Assalamu alaykum

I really enjoyed reading this poem, although many of us are aware of these things going on in the Muslim community i think the poem was very well written and puts things into perspective.

I think what the brother was trying to do was use his talents at poetry writing and expressin his views through that.

MashAllah brother u got talent i enjoy reading ur poems, keep up! [/color]