Poetry Challenge

Razor will win this...

I'll try later, the one i came up with is soo lame and to save myself from embarasment i wont post it up!

Guest why dont u have a go?

Hey dont be afraid to try!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

who cares if its rubbish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

youd have more courage than those poeple who are tooo scared to even try!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Post your entry PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE 😢 😢 😢

Even the lame poetry can be good cos someone can still find somfink useful from it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Start.

Flower.

Heart.

(can't find a place for shower. sorry.) 😃

[quote="Guest"]Hey dont be afraid to try!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

who cares if its rubbish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

youd have more courage than those poeple who are tooo scared to even try!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Post your entry PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE 😢 😢 😢

Even the lame poetry can be good cos someone can still find somfink useful from it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/quote]

Well since Dawud used only 3 words can i use 2?

Here goes (dont say i didnt warn you!)

When you came into my life i felt it was a start,
you won the biggest place in my heart.

Thats it, someone can continue with "flower" and "shower", why shower, that was soo random. Guest its odd calling you that, dont u have a "name"?

This is a silly challenge but I'll make a start,
Lets see... no-one will read it if I write about taking a shower!
Even if I did where would I put the word 'flower'?
I think I'll leave it... I haven't got the heart.

Hmmmmmmmmmmm

Not Bad so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep em coming and try to use all the words 😉 😉 😉

[quote="Guest"]Hmmmmmmmmmmm

Not Bad so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep em coming and try to use all the words 😉 😉 :wink:[/quote]

Come on now ur turn, u may have already taken the challenge, heres one for you, same rules as yours except different words:

Love
Hate
fear
shoe - the random one!

lol at Beast's poem, funny...

What's with the punctuation mark shower?
You haven't even had the heart to tell us your name!
What's your game?
Make a fresh start,
Let the Guest depart,
Fix your keyboard, tell us your name, and a new forumite will flower...

lol thats got to be the best so far....now guest get moving.

I am off and by the time i get here, i hope to see a poem and a new name and no exclamation/question mark either, they just make ur posts look messy :shock:

ok i've always been bad at poetry, so forgive my lame attempt... :oops:

a beautiful flower
followed by a sudden shower
of rain.
a promising start
to a contented heart
free of pain.

(ok so i know i cheated by adding my own extra rhyme, but it seemed to fit in on its own...)

I think angel made a good start, ill see if i can add a semi-decent line to it. here we go:
[color=blue]
When you came into my life i felt it was a [u]start[/u]
you won the biggest place in my [u]heart[/u]
life blossomed like a [u]flower[/u]
as you [u]shower[/u]ed me with love in my darkest hour[/color]

hows that?? I believe i've used all the prescribed words... and it kinda rhymes.
But as angel did half of it she deserves half the credit for starting me off (as thats usually the hardest part).

PS: Welcome back angel.

[quote="Seraphim"]I think angel made a good start, ill see if i can add a semi-decent line to it. here we go:
[color=blue]
When you came into my life i felt it was a [u]start[/u]
you won the biggest place in my [u]heart[/u]
life blossomed like a [u]flower[/u]
as you [u]shower[/u]ed me with love in my darkest hour[/color]

hows that?? I believe i've used all the prescribed words... and it kinda rhymes.
But as angel did half of it she deserves half the credit for starting me off (as thats usually the hardest part).

PS: Welcome back angel.[/quote]

hmm no bad but u used the word "showered" instead of "shower"

Also i am changin my second line:

You won the most special place in my heart

Guest ignore my challenge - i dont knw what i was thinkin :oops:
p.s thanks for the w/b seraph.

[quote="Angel"]

Love
Hate
fear
shoe - the random one!

lol at Beast's poem, funny...[/quote]

More of a commentary than a poem:

Fear is isolation,
hate is seperation,
love is desperation,
shoe is...shoe is...

shoe is the paradox, below the foot and yet above the Earth.

Fear has no shoes, nor would it know them, if it had them,
Hate desires no shoes, nor could it wear them, if it had them
Love, is the shoe that the shoe would wear if it had it.

😃

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[b]DISLIKE[/b]

I hate you

I hate you

I hate you

Yuyu stupid guest

I hate you

I heat you

I hit you

tis rite you stupid guest

I dont rate you

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Omrow thats just childish. :roll:

Guest ignore him.

[quote="Seraphim"]Omrow thats just childish. :roll:

Guest ignore him.[/quote]
😢
Thanks Seraphim 🙂

[quote="Dawud"]
Fear is isolation,
hate is seperation,
love is desperation,
shoe is...shoe is...

shoe is the paradox, below the foot and yet above the Earth.

Fear has no shoes, nor would it know them, if it had them,
Hate desires no shoes, nor could it wear them, if it had them
Love, is the shoe that the shoe would wear if it had it.
[/quote]
All the poems hav been really gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

But Dawuds has to be the best one so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who cares if its not written like a proper poem it makes you think and i like it 😃 😃 😃

Keep then coming either use Angels words or mine and create a poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i'll let it run for a few more days and then choose a winner and then someone else can submit some words and then they can judge for a winner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Is that a good idea or wot.............................

PLEASE more poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[quote="Guest"]Okay I know theres alot of taelent out there so lets try and develop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This thread is for peoples own poetry based on key words that I give!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[b]So the first poetry challenge is this
write a poem - no more than 10 lines that includes the following words:
[size=14]heart,
start,
shower,
flower,[/size]
It can be about anythign u like so get writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/b]

Love to see wot u some up wiv 😃 😃 :D[/quote]

lol guest you aren't a school teacher by any chance are you?

In the name of my lord I [b]start[/b],
Hoping, in his name, from this world I depart.

I wake with the lords name on my mind,
Hoping, the whole day is spent in rememberance, of the divine.

Hoping the lords mercy, upon me does [b]shower[/b],
And, that the mercy and blessing allow me to [b]flower[/b]

As beautiful as a rose, I wish my [b]heart [/b]to be,
A pure heart, I wish for my lord, in me to see.

8)

Hey, I liked Omrow's.

Even though it needed an explanation.

Look at the passion in his words.

[quote="Admin"]Hey, I liked Omrow's.

Even though it needed an explanation.

Look at the passion in his words.[/quote]

u being sarcy?

or are u seeing passion where there aint any? :roll:

when put on the spot-the omro fails to deliver

but on a ordinary day he can sprout poetry over a user name of a new member

Which bit dont you understand boss ?

The reason behind the words.

why do you hate guest? what has guest done to you?

and repeating I hate you is shopwing passion.

Almost poetic.

Salam

She has done me a lot of wrong.

The woman is almost evil.

I am surpised you missed it.

I hate her.

Omrow

You sound like a certain pirate who's website is "the best in the universe" when talking about certain people whom he doesn't like.

So sad.

Here I absolutely take Omrow's side out of respect for participants on these forums.

I hope Start a Flower
which blossoms within the Heart
watered by the Shower of love

huh thats confusin man even for me :?

Love
Hate
Ache
World
Live

Try to make one with these words
I got one
Here goes....

Love is passion
Love is Hate
Love is the ache
That surrounds our World
So let us Love
And Live our Lives.....

[quote="100man"]Here I absolutely take Omrow's side out of respect for participants on these forums.[/quote]
Whatever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :roll: :roll: :roll:

[quote="RuBz"]Love
Hate
Ache
World
Live

Try to make one with these words
I got one
Here goes....
[/quote]
Hey RuBz that's cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
I'll close my challenge in a few days and pick a winner and then you can take over with your words and choose a winner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How cool is that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!