Can you still string a few words together?

can you still string a few words together?
Is the force that hit you way lighter than a feather,
DO i have to write these words ina rhythm to be rap
For there to be running water do i need a tap?
surley before there was a way that i called mine,
Cus it feels somethings lost & i cannot find,
Realised something for the future to ignore my past,
Things are flying by is time moving to fast?
No, its an illusion or thats what theyre telling me,
But whats really in these products that theyre sellin me
Wana bar, shall we catch a bite to eat?
No, because it's like you took the ground under my feet,
Shook it up put it back & something was missing,
& now i'm left here & i dont know why im wishing,
In the night i wana see the stars but i dont see them,
Theres people i wana see but i cud never meet them
Things i wana do but how can i acheive them?
& people who let me down, but i didnt choose to leave them,
Thing is i bin fighting for as long as i can think,
And asa girl my fave coulour was never pink,
Blue, i liked it and was told i wear it best,
They say thats wat they told my grandad wen he was heading west,
my thoughts are on this page but i dont seem to understand,
the words that i be typing with these very hands,
I don't know what it is they want me to beleieve,
I dont get what im chewing with these teeth,
Does this reflect what im trying to mean?
I dano, maybe thats something you could be tellin me.

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I don't get this poem :S

#Before you look at the thorns of the rose , look at it's beauty. Before you complain about the heat of the sun , enjoy it's light. Before you complain about the blackness of the night, think of it's peace and quiet... #